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English Composition 
    英语作文
绝望型          抄写型


精英型          奋斗型
            思考:奋斗型作文存在哪些问题?

 1.汉化严重                    词数?
 2.缺少主宾
 3.人称混乱
 4.时态错误
 5.拼写错误
                    词性                     过渡?
 6.缺少过渡
 7.无头无尾    时态
                                     涂改
 8.漏写信息
             结尾?
 9.词数过少
10.书写潦草
          英语作文评分要求

第一档(14-15分)
所写内容包括表格内所提供的所有信息,虽有少许错误,
但语句通顺,表达流畅,卷面整洁,数字达到要求。
第二档(11-13分)
能写出大部分内容要点,有部分语法错误,但语句基本通
顺,表达基本清楚,词数基本达到要求。
第三档(6-10分)
能写出部分内容要点,表达虽不连贯,但能看出基本意思。
第四档(1-5分)
能写出少量与主题相关的单词或短语,看不出完整句子。
     2017年春学期八年级期末考试英语作文

在一次课堂讨论中,大家对“朋友和友谊”进行了讨论。下面是你的
一些看法,请根据提示以“friendship”为题写一篇70词左右的短文。
1.友谊非常重要,人人都需要朋友。没有朋友的人生就像失去了阳光。
2.朋友之间应该相互信任,可以分享快乐,分担烦恼。
3.俗话说“患难朋友才是真朋友”,朋友应该互相帮助。
4.朋友之间还应该指出对方的错误,帮助他或她改正错误。

提示词:life without friends          sunshine    1.时态?
       share happiness               share worries 2.主语?
       as the says going             point out 3.首尾?
       correct the mistakes
       A friend in need is a friend indeed.
中考英语作文最流行的三段式“               观点--事例--总结“

    Friendship is very important in everyone’s life. We all 
  need friends. Life without friends is just like life without 
  sunshine. 
   What is a friend like? First, we should trust each other. We 
  can share happiness, and we can also share our worries. 
  Second, we should help each other. As the saying goes, “ A 
  friend in need is a friend indeed”. Finally, when a friend 
  makes a mistake, we should point it out and help him to 
  correct the mistake. 
   In my opinion, friendship is the wealth in our life.
2017 年柳州市英语
    中考作文
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Amy下周将要来柳州旅游,你打算带她参
观柳州的一些景点。请根据下列表格信息给她写封邮件,介绍你的计划。


            1.词数70词左右,可适当发挥;                             1.时态?
            2.邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;                      2.主语?
            3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。            参考词汇:           3.格式?
             爬山(climb the hill)
             欣赏大自然的美景(enjoy the beauty of nature)
             去划船(go boating)         照相(take photos)
             逛街(walk along the street) 品尝美食(taste delicious food)
             购物(do some shopping)
___________Dear Army,
I’m very happy you will come to Liu Zhou next week. I plan to 
show you around to visit the places of interest here.
On Monday, I’m going to climb the hill called Ma’an with you 
to enjoy the beauty of nature.  We________will go  to Longtan Park on 
Tuesday. We can__________take a boat on the river and take photos there. 
On Wednesday, We’ll go to Wuxing Steet,______canwe  walk along 
the street, taste delicious food ______doand  some shopping.
I’m sure___________________________________you will have a good time in Liu Zhou.  
Yours'_______
Li_______ Hua
优秀英语作文的基本标准

                                    文意要通俗易懂
                                    过渡要自然顺畅
                                    段落要清晰明了
                                    语句要合乎规范
                                    语法要恰当正确
                                    语言要略有文采
                                    书法要规范整洁
鲁迅是一位伟大的作家,请你根据提示,以“My favourite writer”
为题,写一篇短文介绍鲁迅。不少于80词。

               提示:1881,    born,  short hair, doctor
                    writer, known, a fighter with his pen,
                    thinker,  young people,  influence
                    thoughts

                     1.时态?
                     2.主语?
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