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2017年重庆
市初三英语
复习研讨会

 书面表达
            作文分换算
                            百分制精确
16分制      18分制    百分制估值
                              对应值
  16        18       100        100
  15        17        95       94.4
13-14       16        90       88.9
  12        15        85       83.3
  11        14        80       77.8
  10      12-13      70-75   66.7-72.2
  9         11        60       61.1
 5-8       6-10      35-55   33.3-55.6
 0-4       0-5       0-30     0-27.8
                     书面表达练习一

    水资源问题已成为全世界都关注的重要问题
之一。联合国预计,到2025年,世界将近一半的
人口会生活在缺乏水的地区。请围绕保护水资源
这一话题,写篇短文。
要求:1.要点充分,内容完整。
     2.词数80-120。
参考要点:1.     当前水资源存在的问题(工厂的
污染使河流变脏,人们的浪费)
         2. 我们可以采取的措施(节约用水、
阻止工厂向河流排污水和倾倒垃圾,告诉人们保
护水资源的重要性...)
         3.……
开头——水的重要性


 The problem of water resources has become more and
 more serious, which draws many people’s attention.
It’s well-known that water is one of the most important
things in our daily lives.
当前水资源存在的问题(工厂的污染使河流变脏,人们的
浪费)

We have serious problems of water resources now.
Some factories often pour waste water in the river and
people waste alt of water.
                                          我们可以采取的措施(节
                                          约用水、阻止工厂向河流
                                          排污水和倾倒垃圾,告诉
                                          人 们 保 护 水 资 源 的 重 要
                                          性...)

                                          1. 主语从句,in      order
                                          to do
                                          2.连接词   what’s  more,
                                          also
                                          3. should be done
                                          4. 倒装
                                          --覆盖所有参考要点
                                          --内容切题、充实,上下
                                          文语意连贯,表达清楚、
                                          完整,具有逻辑性。
                                          --语言准确、用语规范、
第一档:17分            有少量语法错;                表达准确、无语法错误;
                                          --词汇和句型句式运用恰
没明显亮笔之处。                                  当,富于变化,多见好词
                                          好句,体现良好的语言能
                                          力和写作功底
结构不合理。
句式词汇单一。
第三档  13-14分   基本完成了试题规定的任务。
—含有所有主要内容。
—要点齐全,结构完整。
—语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,有一些错误,但不影响理解。
—连贯与衔接不够,词汇句式单一。
                          书面表达练习二
   2017年2月,来自复旦大学附属中学的武亦姝同学凭借
丰富的诗词知识,获得《中国诗词大会》第二季的冠军,从
而名声大振,并成为国人心目中的“才女”。在采访中,她
说到,诗人陆游是她的偶像,因此她从小热爱并识记了大量
的中国古诗词,为她此次夺冠打下了基础。
   我们大多数人也有自己的偶像,他们可能是作家、政治
家、商人、音乐人等各行各业的名人,也可能是我们身边的
长辈、朋友。21世纪英语报正在进行“我的偶像”为题的征
文比赛,请你按要求给该报纸投去一份征文。
要求:1.要点充分,内容完整。
     2.词数:80~120词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考要点:1.     偶像的信息(身份、职业、性格特点……)
         2. 偶像的事迹(知名事迹、成就、善举……)
         3. ……
                     My Idol
Common people usually have their own idols for their special 
talents or qualities, so do I. _____________________________
___________________________________________________
第二档
6-10分
                        My Idol
  Common  people usually have their own idols
for their special talents or qualities, so do I.
  My grandmother is idol in my mind. She is just a
farmer. She neither makes great influence on the
world or saves the world.
  But I learn a lot from her. She has headache
because she is 60 years old. Not only does she never
say where hurts but also she stands hurt on her own.
Every time I see that she sits on the chair, it reminds
me of my terrible days in the past. She doesn't lay
importance on herself. She always thinks for others.
  As for me, when I want to give up while I solving
problem instead of sticking to do it. I should learn
from my grandmother.
  Common  people usually have their own idols for their
special talents or qualities, so do I.
  My grandmother is idolmy inidol my mind. She is just a farmer. She
neither makeshas a greatgreat influenceinfluence on the worldnoror saves the world.
  But I learnhave learnta lot from her. She hashas aheadache headachebecause she is 60
years old. Not only does she never complainsay where about herhurts painbut also
shebearsstands her painhurt on her own. Every time I see that she sits on the
chair, it reminds me of my terrible days in the past. She doesn't
lay importance on herself. She always thinks for others.
  As for me, when I want to give up whilewhile solvingI solving a problemproblem
instead of sticking to do it. I should learn from my grandmother.

点评:                              第二档:     10-11
1. 要点看似全部覆盖,但只是蜻蜓点水,阐述不具体,
未点题                              分
2. 句式多变,但逻辑松散,上下文联系不紧密,          最终得分:   按照内容
3. 句中语法错误较多
语法错误以红字体标出,有逻辑问题的部分以下划线          看,可得10分;
标出                               使用较高级的句型,
                                 可能会打到11分。
                        My Idol
  Common  people usually have their own idols
for their special talents or qualities, so do I.
  My  idol is my father. He is a very common
person. And he often makes mistakes. He isn't very
handsome and clever. But he is my idol.
  I still remember that day. My father and I went
shopping. We was about to go into the market, when
an old lady fell down. She shouted: “Help help!”
But nobody helped her, because they were afraid of
getting into trouble. My father looked at the lady,
then he ran to her without thinking. He helped the
lady up carefully.
  This is my father, I'm proud of him. And I have
learned that we should try our best to help others.
  Common people usually have their own idols for their special
talents or qualities, so do I.
  My idol is my father. He is a very common person. And he often
makes mistakes. He isn't very handsome andor clever. But he is my
idol.
  I still remember that day. My father and I went shopping. We
werewas about to go into the market, when an old lady fell down. She
shouted: Help!“Help Help!help!” But nobody helped her, because they were
afraid of getting into trouble. My father looked at the lady, then he
ran to her without thinking. He helped the lady up carefully.
  This is my father, I'm proud of him. And I have learned that we
should try our best to help others.

点评:—要点齐全,    结构完整,逻辑有序。含有     第三档:    15分
所有主要内容。                       最终得分:   仅看内容约14
—应用的语法结构和词汇基本能满足任务的要求。        分;
—语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,有些许错
误,但不影响理解。                     因为书写清晰工整,卷面
—应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。        整洁,可能也会打15分。
—句式和用词简单,描写欠生动,
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