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                2017 年成都市中考冲刺	
                       B  卷书面表达 

 一. 知彼知己 

      (一)知己:(3         方面) 
      1、中考作文     15 分,高考作文      25 分。 

      2、考查本质:送分题。 

      3、写作目的:取悦阅卷老师。 

      (二)知彼:(1         方面) 

      明确阅卷老师的盲区:阅 卷 老 师 在           短时间内要阅读海量同一主题的文

      章,枯燥乏味,难免产生厌倦感,尤其是阅读无可读性的文章和有严

      重书写问题的文章。我们要做的就是换位思考,体贴阅卷老师,阅卷
      老师也会知道我们的良苦用心。 
                         


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二.英语作文评分原则 

1、总分为15分,按五个档次给分。 

2、根 据 内 容 的 完 整 性 、语 言 的 标 准 性 及 文 章 结 构 的 合 理 性 初 步 确 定 所 属 档      

   次,   然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调档。 

3、评分时,应着重注意考生所应用词汇、语法结构的准确性、上下文的连 

   贯性及相关的完整性。 

4、词数少于80的,从总分中减去2分。 

5、拼写与标点符号是语言标准性的一个方面,应适当予以考虑,最多扣2 

   分。 

6、如书写较差,以致影响交际的酌情扣分。 

    各档次的给点分范围及要求 

一级(13-15分) 

1、所写内容符合所提供的各种信息,有创意; 

2、句子正确通顺,或只有个别小错; 

3、单词拼写错误不超过4个。 

二级(10-12分) 

1、所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合; 

2、句子基本正确。表达错误较少,表达较通顺; 


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3、单词拼写错误不超过6个。 

三级    (7-9分) 

1、所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符; 

2、句子表达错误较多,但尚可读懂; 

3、单词拼写错误不超过10个。 

四级    (4-6分) 

1、所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符; 

2、只有少数句子表达正确; 

3、拼写错误在10个以上。 

五级(3分以下) 

只有个别词语可读,但通篇不知所云。 

中考英语书面表达试题属综合运用型试题,是考查学生运用各项语法知识、

正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容,那考生怎样来提

高这部分试题的分数呢?请看写作16字标准 

	
                         


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                2017 年成都市中考冲刺	
三.16      字写作标准 

      1. 切题(2       方面) 
      (1)体裁正确 
      (2)提纲全部要点完整 
       
      2. 思路清晰(2          方面) 
      (1)分段清晰 
      (2)提纲要点顺序清晰、易找:提纲顺序 = 要点顺序 
          (注意过渡词的使用)见附录                1 
       
      3. 少量语法错误 
         学生最典型的语法错误集中在                3 种:名词出现形式、动词时态、
      多动症。 
       
      4. 语言亮点 
      (1)句式多变:长短句结合 
      (2)用词面广:忌重复 
      考生须在中考考纲范围内,根据已知词汇和句型完成写作提纲要
      求的任务。 
                         


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  三.四大体裁专训 

  1. 议论文 

  (一)  考查年份:(共         3 年)2007、2008、2014         年 

  (二)  分类:(3     类) 
  1、常规议论文: 
  针对文章某一件事或某个现象进行观点的阐述及论证,并提出解决方案。 
  2、正反议论文: 
      根据写作主题,对提纲中的一个议题做正反两方面的论证,必要时还要发
      表你的观点(赞成某一方)。 
  3、选择型议论文: 
     给出两种或多种选择,要求作出选择并陈述选择的理由,如                          2014 年成都市
     中考作文。 

(三)议论文写作模板 

       Recently, we did a survey/ discussion about whether we should+主题. 

  Different people/students hold different opinions. 

       Some people hold the idea that +议题一. For one thing, +理由一. For  

  aonther, +理由二. While others are in disagreement for the following two reasons.  

  To begin with, +理由一. Besides, +理由二. 

       From my point of view, I would rather + 我的观点,because +理由.   As a 

  student, it is our duty to …(口号). Therefore, 我的观点 would be a good choice 

  for us. 

  (四)范文: 

  1.【2007   年成都市中考真题】 

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                2017 年成都市中考冲刺	
   假如你叫李平。最近,你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意	
见(见下表)。现在,请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。	
注意:	
   1.信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容;	
   2.书信格式正确;	
   3.书写整洁;	
	  4.词数在    80 个左右。	
生词提示: electronic adj.电子的    explanation(s) n. 解释,说明 
 发表意见者	      对使用电子词典的不同意见	

    同学	      有用,方便,节省查阅时间	
    家长	      便于携带,多数家庭买得起	

  英语教师	      对单词的解释太简单,不该使用	

    本人	      会使我们变懒惰,不该使用	
 
One possible version: 
Dear Editor, 
   I’m writing the letter to tell you that recently I did a survey about whether 
we should use electronic dictionaries. Different people hold different opinions. 
   Many students hold the idea that we should use electronic dictionaries. For one  
thing, they are useful and convenient. For another, they can help us to save time  
when we need to look up new words. Besides, many parents also agree with these 
students. They say electronic dictionaries are easy to carry. What’s more, most  
families can afford them.  
   However, many English teachers are in disagreement. They think the  
explanations of the words in electronic dictionaries are too simple. From my point  
of view, I would rather not use them because using electronic dictionaries too much 
will make us lazy.  
                                                     Yours, 
                                                     Li Ping 
 
 
 
 
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2、【2014  年成都市中考真题】 
四、书面表达。(       计 15 分) 
   你即将升入高中,面临寄宿(a boarding school)         和走读(a day school) 
两类学校的选择。请你以            “A boarding school or a day school?” 为标题,写一 
篇 80-120 词的短文,内容须包括: 
1. 读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点; 
2. 读走读学校的利和弊各一点; 
3.	 你的选择和理由(理由不得与上述两点内容重复)。	
注意:1.	  短文必须包括所有要点;	
      2.	 可根据内容要点适当添加有关细节,使行文连贯;	
      3.	 书写规范,卷面整洁。	
                   A boarding school or a day school? 
    ___________(最近), we students are facing a choice on _______________ 
(是否在…学习)in a boarding school or a day school. Either choice has 
____________________.(它的优缺点) 
    Studying in a boarding school, we can __________________(依靠自己) and 
 ___________________(更好利用时间). ____________(但是), life in a boarding   
school is ______________________________________(不像在家里方便和舒 
适). ____________(另一方面), if we__________________(在走读学校上课), 
we can spend more time with our families. But at the same time, 
_____________________________________________(在上放学的路上会花很 
长时间)。 
    ________________(对我而言), I’d like to __________________(进入寄 
宿学校). I believe it is a good way for me to learn to ______________(相处) my 
classmates. Besides, I can ___________________(获得更多的社会经验). 
                         


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                   A boarding school or a day school? 
    Recently, we students are facing a choice on whether to study in a boarding  
school or a day school. Either choice has its own advantages and disadvantages. 
    Studying in a boarding school, we can depend on ourselves and make better  
use of time. However, life in a boarding school is not as convenient and  
comfortable as that at home. However, if we study in a day school, we can spend  
more time with our families. But at the same time, it may take too much time on  
the way to school and back home. 
    As for me, I’d like to enter a boarding school. I believe it is a good way for me  
to learn to get well along with my classmates. Besides, I can get more social  
experience. 
                         


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                2017 年成都市中考冲刺	
2. 说明文 

(一)  考查年份:(共        4 年)2011、2013、2015、2016      年 

(二)  考查本质: 
根据写作提纲,具体说明提纲的全部要点。说明文体裁的书面表达是一篇标
准的汉译英。需“意译”。 

(三)  分类:(3     类) 
1、常规说明文:根据提纲要点全面介绍某事物。 
2、对比说明文:比较同一事物在不同发展阶段的前后变化; 
               比较两个不同事物的优劣之处。 
   注意:比较原则:横向比较。 
3、图表议论文:根据图表内容,对图表所反映出来的现象进行说明。 
 

(四)  注意事项:(3       方面) 
1.说明文无模板,无框架,学生需根据提纲要点进行翻译,且为意译。 
2.提纲必须完整,提纲顺序必须正确,要点顺序即为写作顺序。 
3.说明文的重点为提纲要点的语言组织;即写作句式的运用。 

(五)  范文: 

1、【 2016 年成都市中考真题】 

四、书面表达(计        15 分。请直接书写在答题卡的相应位置。) 
    请根据下面的“熊猫研究基地一日游”公告用英语写一篇短文,向某报旅
游信息专栏投稿。 
注意:1.短文应包括公告内的所有信息。 
2.根据短文内容,拟一个恰当的标题。 
3.短文应结构完整,语句连贯,句式多样;不得逐条翻译。 
4.词数:100    左右。 
参考词汇:熊猫研究基地           the Panda Research Base 


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One possible vision: 
                    A Day Trip to thePanda Research Base 
   I believe all of us, young or old, want to spend our holiday wonderfully.  
Therefore, I’d like to introduce you a good plan——A Day Trip to thePanda  
Research Base. Here is the information you might need. 
   To begin with, it’s necessary to learn the price of entrance. There are four 
kinds of tickets which are 50yuan for adults, 25yuan for the old above sixty years  
old or children from six to twelve, and totally free for children under six years old 
 (These tickets are only valid for one day). Besides, if you travel there by car, you  
don’t have to pay for the car parking. As for the time, you’re able to pay a visit to  
the base from 9:00a.m. to 17:00 a.m. at any day of the week. Last but not the least,  
the base is open all year round except the Lantern Festival. 
   I hope you all will have an unforgettable experience if you have a day in the  
Panda Research Base. 

2、【 2015 年成都市中考真题】 
四、书面表达。(       计 15 分) 
    请根据以下交通事故因素(factors)统计图表,以“Major causes of                 
traffic accidents” 为题,用英语写一篇简短的分析报告,向学校英语报投稿。 
注意: 
    1. 报告需逐条陈述下面         pie chart(饼形图)和     bar chart (柱状图)  
       中呈现的主要内容。(至少           5 点) 
    2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。(至少               2 点) 
    3. 词数:100   词左右,所给标题不计入总词数。 

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One possible vision: 
                      Major Causes of Traffic Accidents 
    Nowadays, there are always kinds of _____________________(交通事故报 
告)from newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to  
analyze the major causes. _________________________.(原因如下) 
   __________________________(根据饼形图), there are mainly three factors: 
85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and ________________ 
__________(. 10%是路况环境因素)Among them,it’s quite clear that the first one 
is  the  key  point. The  other bar  chart points  thatthere  are  4  reasons,  including 
speeding which takes up 50%, _____________________(酒驾占 15%), fatigue 
and drowsy driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-beltwhich is 25%. 
   _________________(就我而言), ______________________________(每
个人应该牢记)that traffic safety is one of themost important ways in our life. At 
the same time, we should try our best to ____________________(遵守交通规则).
The more carefully we try, the happier our life will be! 
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    
    

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3、【 九下金牛实验半期】 

   上周学校英语报记者对           100 名学生以	   “What	quality	do	you	think	is	 	
important	in	junior	high	school?”为题做了调查,调查结果如下图。请根据图表	
内容,为学校英语报写一篇调查报告。	
                 学生品质调查	
   	
   	
                 乐于助人	  学习成绩好	
   	
                  (7%)	  (14%)	
	             习惯好	
	             (18%)	
                性格好	     善于与人沟通	
   	
                (26%)	     (35%)	
	
   	
	
	
   要求:	   1.	 分析图表数据,描述图表中信息(5              条)。	
          2.	 谈谈自己的观点(1       条)。	
	  注意:	   1.	 字数:90-110  词;开头已给出,不计入总词数;	
	  	   	  2.	 应覆盖所有要点,可适当增加细节;	
	  	   	  3.	 文章条理清楚,行文连贯,文章不出现真实的校名和人名。	
         What quality do you think is important in junior high school? 
   Last week, our school English newspaper made a survey about what quality is  
important in junior high school.  
 
 
 
 
 
                         

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2015 年中考	
One possible vision: 
                      Major Causes of Traffic Accidents 
    Nowadays, there are always kinds of reports about traffic accidents from 
newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the  
major causes. The causes are as follows. 
   According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver  
factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, 
it’s quite clear that the first one is the key point. The other bar chart points that  
there are 4 reasons, including speeding which takes up 50%, drunk driving which  
holds 15%, fatigue and drowsy driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt  
which is 25%. 
   In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the  
most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic  
rules. The more carefully we try, the happier our life will be! 
	
                                                              Love, 
2016 金牛实验九下半期	
         What quality do you think is important in junior high school? 
   Last week, our school English newspaper made a survey about what quality is  
important in junior high school. 35% students think being good at communicating  
with others is the most important quality. The number of Students supporting good 
character ranks the second, which is 28%, followed by good habits taking up 18%  
and having good grades taking up 14%. There are 7% students who think the most  
important quality is to be willing to help others.  
   From my point of view, doing well in communicating with others is the most 
important quality because it is not only good for others but also good for ourselves. 
It is a kind of wisdom. 
                         


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                2017 年成都市中考冲刺	
3. 议论说明文 

(一)  考查年份:(共        3 年)2009、2010、2012     年 

(二)  考查本质: 
     根据写作提纲,具体说明提纲的全部要点,并发表观点,说明理由。 

(三)  写作框架:(三段式) 

核心:议论说明文具有议论文和说明文的双重特征,因此既需要先论点后

       论据,又需要按照提纲要点按顺序进行翻译(意译)。 

1.第一段: 描述现象,提出观点。 
2. 第二段: 说明原因、要点或方案。 
3. 第三段: 得出结论并提出口号。 

(四)  范文: 

1、【 2012 年成都市中考真题】 

五、书面表达。(计        l0 分)	
   英语课上,我们时常进行小组活动。但如何能让这种活动帮助我们 
把英语学得更好?现在,请根据以下要点,以“How Can Group Activities                    
Help Us Study English Better?”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。 
   (1)活动的任务及完成方式要明确; 
   (2)小组内要有不同的角色分工、要合作; 
   (3)教师的必要帮助; 
   (4)活动结果要在班上分享。 
注意: 
   (1)短文题目已经给出,不计入总词数(80~100                词); 
   (2)短文必须包括提示,要点和恰当的结尾; 
   (3)文中不得出现师生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 
参考词汇: 
   cooperatevi. 合作;    role n.角色;    share vt.分享; 
   How Can Group Activities Help Us Study English Better? 
 
 
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          How Can Group Activities Help Us Study English Better? 
   In English class, we often have group activities. But how can group activities  
help us study English better?  
   To begin with, we must make it clear what the task is for each group and how  
it should be done. Besides, each group member must have a different role and the  
whole group should cooperate well. At the same time, teachers should offer  
students some help if it is necessary during the activities. In the end, the activity 
results must be shared in class. 
   As an English learner in a group, as long as we follow the suggestions above, 
we are sure to study English better. 

2、【 成 都 市 武 侯 区 2012—2013 学年度上期九年级期末英语】 

	  	近年来,我国中学生厌学的现象越来越严重,表现尤为突出的是:	
抄袭作业已经成为一种普遍现象。上周海口中学九年级八班的学生召开	
了主题班会。在班会上,老师和学生就抄袭作业的原因、作业布置的目	
的以及可能带来的危害进行了激烈的讨论。请根据表格提供的信息,	
“My opinion on copying others’ homework”为题写一遍短文。 
                 1. 自身比较懒惰,怕苦怕累,觉得学习是一件很
                    苦很累并且很乏味的事情; 
 抄袭作业的原因 
                 2. 作业布置过多。 
                 3. 部分学生不善于合理安排时间。 
                 1. 让学生更好的巩固所学的知识。 
 作业布置的目的         2. 让老师及时了解学生的情况,以便更好地突出
                    教学重、难点。 
                 1. 抄袭不对,违反校规。 
 个人对抄袭作业
                 2. 要诚实,勤奋学习,有困难可以请教老师和同
 的看法 
                    学。 
注意:1.	  内容包括表格中的信息,可适当发挥。	
	  			2.	 开头已给出,不计入总词数	
	  			3.	 词数:80  词左右	
                 My opinion on copying others’ homework 
    Last week, the students of Class 8, Grade 9, Haikou Middle School had  
a warm discussion on copying others’ homework. Nowadays, copying others’ 
homework is very common at school. Why do so many students like to copy 
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homework? 
 
 
 
 
A possible vision: 
My opinion on copying others’ homework 
    Last week, the students of Class 8, Grade 9, Haikou Middle School had  
a warm discussion on copying others’ homework. Nowadays, copying others’ 
homework is very common at school.  
    Why do so many students like to copyhomework? Here are three main  
reasons. To begin with, students themselves are lazy and afraid of the hardships of 
study, they also think it is tiring and boring to study. Besides, students complain 
about being given too much homework by teachers. Last but not the least, some 
students are not good at spending their time reasonably. 
   However, homework are supposed to be better understood. It is given to help 
students better know what they have learnt. What’s more, teachers can get more 
information of their students in time so that they can better know the difficulties 
and key points of study by assigning homework.  
   From  my  point  of  view,  copying  others’  homework  is  not right because  it's 
against school rules. As  a  middle  school  student,  it’s  our  duty  to be honest  and 
work hard to get good grades. If we have difficulties, we can ask the teachers or our 
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                           4.  记叙文 

(一)  考查年份:(共       4 年) 2003、2004、2005、2006          年。 

(二)  考查本质:        
提纲多以看图说话的形式,描述故事情节,并发表个人收获。 

(三)  写作框架(三段式)核心:①时态;②故事情节细节。 
1、第一段:写出事件背景、梗概; 
2、第二段:描述所发生事件的详细过程; 
3、第三段:发表个人感想、收获或思考。 

(四)  范文:     

【成都市文翁实验中学            2014-2015 学年度上学期九年级          10 月月考】 
    七天国庆假期结束了。有的同学过的很愉快,有的同学过得很充实;有的
同学过的非常有意义。你的国庆假期怎么度过的?感受如何?假如你是                               Lucy,
请给你的英语老师王老师写一封信,告诉她你的国庆假期经历。 
要求:    1.以书信的格式。 
       2.写出国庆几天你经历的主要事件。 
       3.阐述清楚,条理清晰。字数            100 字左右。 
 
   Dear Mr. Wang, 
    How are you these days? I had a great time during the National Day.  
Now, let me tell you some interesting experiences. 
   To begin with, I traveled to Jiuzhai Valley with my parents for three days. As  
we know, it’s the best time to go sightseeing there in autumn. So we enjoyed  
the beauty of such a wonderful place. Moreover, we went to visit my father’s  
friend. And we had a big meal together. At last, I finished all my homework  
with my cousin’s help. 
   The National Day holidays have passed by. I felt tired but very happy.  
What about yours? 
                                             Best wishes, 
                                                 Lucy 
                         
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附录    1 句首句间逻辑词(8            类) 
   1)首先: 
      First of all,=To begin with,=Firstly        
   2)并列关系过渡词 
      Besides, =What’s more,=In addition, = Furthermore = Moreover 
      At the same time 
   3)转折关系过渡词 
      However, =  On the other hand 
      While + 句子 
   4)举例过渡词 
       for example = for instance +句子 
       such as =like +名词或名词性的短语/doing 
   5)因果关系过渡词 
       because,as a result, therefore, 
   6)最后 
      At last,=In the end,= Last but not least 
   7)在我看来 
       From my point of view,  
       In my opinion, = As far as I am concerned,  
   8)总结关系过渡词 
       In brief, in short, above all, all in all, in conclusion 
                         


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   附表    2.    书信体作文框架: 
【套路】 
  但凡应试书信,逃不出三种段落: 
  开头段:四大内容 
   1、问候;2、自我介绍;3、写信背景;为什么会写这封信 
   4、写信目的;写这封信想达到什么目的 
  中间段:具体问题+具体分析; 
  结尾段:客套话; 
 
口诀: 
开门见山说意图,咨询建议              123,不同内容可分段, 
感谢客气不可少,期待回信成老套 
 
【经典套话】 
(一)开头段:灵活地去写四种内容: 
1、问候; 
  How are you doing?/How is everything going? 
  How is life treating you? 
2、自我介绍; 
  I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy studying in XXX middle school. 
  I am LiHua, who... 
3、写信背景(写信的缘由) 
  I heard that .../learned that...我得知... 
  You said in your last letter that... 
4、写信目的; 
  Now, I am writing this letter to tell you about my …. 
  Now, I am happy/glad to tell you … 
(二)中间段:具体问题(主题句)+具体分析(拓展句) 
      1. 邀请信:描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、意义、地点、时 
      间、参加者和其它事项; 
      Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活动主题或活 
       动目的,如:the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is 
       not only educational but also meaningful. )Moreover, (活动的地点和 
       时间,如    it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of 
       June 15th.) What's more,(活动人员,如:       ten students will take part  
       in it.)Finally, (其他信息,如:if you need any further information,  
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       please call me at 44876655. ) 
    2. 建议信:写给对方的具体建议                   
       There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ...  
       Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,... 
    常见的建议句型: 
      You are supposed to do sth./You’d better do sth. 
      Why not do sth?/It’s a good idea for you to do sth. 
      It’s a good choice for you to do sth./It will be better if you do sth. 
 
(三)结尾段:想写好第三段,就要背过各种客套话! 
    1. 建议信: 
       Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is 
       anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible.  
       I'm sure you can solve your problem before long. 
 
 
          
                         


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附录    3.  常用谚语: 
   As an old English saying goes, “ (7 个)                ” 
   ①Practice makes perfect            熟能生巧 
   ②Time and tide wait for no man     时不待人 
   ③Respect the old and cherish the young  尊老爱幼 
   ④Knowledge is power                    知识就是力量 
   ⑤Rome was not built in a day           罗马不是一日建成 
   ⑥Where there is a will, there is a way.  有志者,事竟成! 
   ⑦Every coin has two sides.             每个硬币都有两面性。 
 

句中常用名词:(12            个) 
   government    政府;               society       社会;     
   country       国家;               nature        自然;   
   environment   环境;               purpose       目的 
   reason        原因;               conclusion    结论 
   relationships  人际关系;            advantage     优点;   
   disadvantage  缺点;               solution      解决方案 
    
                         


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                        示范作文(共       8 篇) 
按照话题共分       6 大类: 
 

一、绿色低碳生活 
节约资源,保护环境,从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生,我们应该怎
样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low--carbon life”为题写一篇短文,简述自
己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80                词左右。 
提示: 
1.步行或骑自行车上学; 
2.节约用水; 
3.不用塑料袋; 
4.节约用电; 
5.充分使用纸张。 
参考词汇:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap 
                          My low-carbon life 
    Nowadays, with the development of industry, the environment is becoming 
worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every  
part of our country. Here are some suggestions on how we can have a low-carbon 
life? 
    To begin with, each of us can go to school on foot or by bike. Besides, we 
shouldn’t waste water or electricity. We are supposed to turn off the lights when  
leaving the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. What’s more, we’d 
better use cloth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. In the end, we had 
better also make full use of paper. We are expected to recycle some of our 
textbooks. 
  As middle school students, as long as we follow the advice above, we are sure 
to own a low-carbon life soon. 

二、风俗礼仪类         (2  篇) 

1  
刚到中国来学习不久的            John 应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客,因此                   John 
向  Bob 请教相关礼仪。假设你是             Bob,请你给    John 回一封电子邮件,告
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诉他一些注意事项。80           词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 
Dear John, 
    I am glad to receive your email. Don't worry about your visit to your Chinese  
teacher’s home. Here are some useful suggestions. 
    To begin with, you ought to arrive a little earlier, because being late is  
impolite. Besides, it’s also polite to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit.  
What’s more, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner, so you are not 
supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. At the same time, you’d better 
say that the food tastes delicious while eating. In the end, when you finish your  
dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long  
after dinner. 
   I believe everything will be OK. Good luck! 
                                                        Yours, 
                                                         Bob 
 
2  
假设上周六晚上,你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示,
用英语写一篇短文,描述事情发生的经过,并适当加以评论。 
要点提示: 
1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。 
2. 你请他们不要那样做。 
3. 他们不听,反而嘲笑你。 
4. 你认为: 

①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。 

②年轻人是祖国的未来,应该...... 
参考词汇:嘲笑         laugh at 
要求: 
1. 词数  80 左右,短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 
2. 要点齐全,行为连贯,可适当发挥。 
  Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. 
    We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers  
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sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began  
to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and 
advised them to stop smoking. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions.  
Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive. 
    From my point of view, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our 
country lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also  
make contributions to the society. 
 

三、同一事物过去与现在对比类                 (1  篇) 

背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友                   Michael 给他发来电子邮件,想了
解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给                              Michael 回一
封电子邮件。 
过去:生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便...... 
现在:生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及...... 
要求: 
1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述; 
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面; 
3.词数  80 词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。 
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),
telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy 
Dear Michael, 
   I’m glad to know that you want to know the changes about my hometown from  
your last letter. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago. 
    In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses 
or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family had to live in a small, 
dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were 
simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away 
mainly by letter or telegram. 
    Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent  
years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are 
wide enough. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have moved  

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into big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many  
good policies, we are sure our lives will become better and better. 
                                                 Sincerely 
                                                 Kang Min 
 
 

四、学习方法建议类(1            篇) 

亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English 
Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。 
要求: 
1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟; 
2.词数  80 左右。 
                          My English Study 
    How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking 
back, I have many memories of my English study. 
    When I entered the middle school, I had a had time with my English. I was not  
able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases.  
For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my  
classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English  
every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in 
English. 
    In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it 
well. 
 

五、其他类       (3  篇) 

1    网购优缺点对比说明             
随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网
购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以
下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。 
优点:1.足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。 
      2.价格通常比较便宜。 
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      3.可供选择的范围广,品种多。 
缺点:   1.只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。 
       2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。 
注意: 
1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面; 
2.80 词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。 
参考词汇:网购         shopping online; 避免做某事     avoid doing sth; 商品 
goods; 导致   cause 
     Nowadays with the development of the Internet, many people are used to 
shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also 
join the group. 
    Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can 
buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired 
and being trapped in the crowded people and cars. You can save much time. When  
shopping online, you can choose from more kinds of goods, whose prices are  
generally lower. However, every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are clear, too. 
On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you  
see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy 
goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. 
     As a middle school student, I do believe time and tide wait for no man. 
Shopping online is such a tide . 
 
2 如何保持和父母的良好关系                
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为                           How to keep a good 
relationship with parents 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短
文参加此次活动。 
要点: 
1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;2.你对这些问
题的看法;3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。 
               How to keep a good relationship with parents 
    In my family, I have too many rules. My parents never allow me to 
go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, 

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either. But they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents 
don’t quite understand me. 
    However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to 
make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is 
because they really love me and want me to have a bright future. 
    In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to 
them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help 
them do some housework. 
  
3 中学生喜欢流行音乐之调查类 
现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇                                   80
词左右的短文。 
 students Kind                        reason 

 a few    quiet music                 make them feel comfortable 
 many     musicians who can write their cool 
          own lyrics 
 most     music that they can dance to full of energy 
   Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs. Recently, I 
did a survey about it among students. Here are the results. 
    A few of them like quiet music because they think it makes them 
feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own 
lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the 
students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. 
When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music. 
	
    
	


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