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One of your classmates came in this 
morning looking very upset about 
something, but you cannot imagine 
what it is. Discuss with a partner 
what body language or behaviour 
made you think there was a problem.
A: I think that there’s something wrong 
   with Lin Pei. When she came in today, 
   she kept her face down and wouldn’t 
   speak.
B: Yes, when I saw her in class, she…

    如何用英语写表达关切之情的信
    Your classmate left very quickly after 
class, so you want to write him/her a 
short letter to ask about what is wrong 
and whether you can help. Use the 
structure on the right to help you.
Dear (friend’s name),
      (1st paragraph: describe the body 
language that you noticed)
      (2nd paragraph: ask if something is 
wrong; perhaps make some guesses)
      (3rd paragraph: offer to help; remind 
him / her that you are a good friend)
                       (closing),
                        (your name)
本单元要求给同学写一封信表示关心。
此类作文属于应用文。如题目所示,首
先要通过表情、行为或其他肢体语言描
述朋友离开时的情景;其次提出疑问或
猜测,表示对朋友这种异常行为的关注
;最后提出帮助,表达自己的关切之情
。
写作时应注意下面几点:
1. 确定文体:属于应用文中的书信。
2. 主体时态:文章以一般过去时和一般现
  在时为主。
3. 主体人称:以第一人称和第二人称为主
  。
4. 内容要点:①情景描述;②询问理由或
  做出猜测;③自然的结尾(表示关心或
  提出帮助)。
写作要求
1. 注意信的格式。
2. 要明确写信的对象。只有对象明确了,
  表达关切之情的内容才好安排。
3. 语言要亲切、生动,感情要充沛、真挚
  。
4. 注意主题突出,语言简练。
语言积累
Body Language:
looking sideways; blinking; avoiding 
some one’s eyes
eyebrows slightly pushed together; head 
down, white face
nodding head; head shaking side to side 
leaning forward; hands in pockets, 
tapping foot
crossing arms or legs; patting on the 
back; walking up and down
high pitched voice; forced smiles (mouth 
smiles but eyes do not)
pointing; thumbs-up; fingers crossed; 
shrug
trembling lower lip; clenched fists
sweating; gasping and holding breath
putting hands on the waist
开头: 
I’m shocked / awfully sorry to hear that 
...
It was a great shock to hear that ...
It broke my heart to hear that ...
I just can’t tell you how sad I was when I 
heard that ...
I can’t tell you how sorry I felt when I 
heard that ...
I am writing to express my deep 
sympathy / care for you.
正文:
I understand how you feel now.
I know the way you feel very well.
You’ll always have a support in me.
It’s true that attitude decides everything. So 
you should never give up no matter what 
happens.
We are best friends so I will ...
Please let me know if there is anything I can 
do.
If I can be of any help, please don’t hesitate 
to let me know.
结尾:
I’m looking forward to ...
I hope our caring will help to comfort 
you.
I hope that time will take away the 
sorrow (悲伤) of your recent loss.
Remember that my heart and my 
thoughts are with you.
假设你叫李华,得知你的英国朋友安德
鲁(Andrew)的爱犬火花(Sparky)出车祸身
亡,请你给他写一封慰问信。
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