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长江之旅游
•       泰山之旅
   你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中
国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或
者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请
你给他回信,内容包括:
                   1.泰山
1.你的建议的线路           Mount Tai
2.你的理由             2. 长江
3.你的祝愿               the Changjiang River
                      the Yangtze River 
注意:1.词数不少于50
      2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________
                            Yours, 
                            Li   Hua                                               
                 Problems

1.长江之行    泰山之旅任选一
2. 两者不要比较。
(改错)
3.It is famous for its beautiful________ sceneries.
                         scenery
4. It will help us get close to the\  nature.
5. advice  n  suggestions
        v  advise sb to do sth
                 doing
6. I'm writing to recommend the better route to you.
  You'd better chose the trip to Mount Tai.
  I personally think going to visit the Yangtze River 
  is a better route. 
1. 首先:   first of all
         to start / begin with
2. 做某事有困难
 have difficulty doing 
3. 人类文明的发源地之一
  one of the origins of human civilization
4. 三峡
 the Three Gorges
5.会当临绝顶,一览众山小

Only when you stand on the top of the highest 
mountain, you can see others are small.
6. 祈福
 pray for good luck / fortune
5. 去…旅行
  go on a trip to…
  take a trip to…
  make a trip to…
6. poet  /  poem
7. It (the Changjiang River) has beautiful scenery.
 We can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the 
  Changjiang River.
8. It have many old Chinese buildings.
  We can enjoy many ancient Chinese buildings 
  along the Changjiang River.
 There are many ancient Chinese buildings along 
  the Changjiang River.
                Para 1
Dear Jim,
  Glad to know that you’re going on a trip to
China. Now I’m writing to recommend the 
better route to you. 
第二段:长江之旅
   Personally, I think paying a visit to the 
Yangtze River is a better choice, which has 
its special /unique appeal. First of all, the 
amazing secenery especially the Three 
Gorges will impress you deeply. In addition, 
Yangtze Riveris the origin of human 
civilization and is heavy with beautiful 
legends, through which you will  better know 
our traditional culture. It will live up to 
your expectations and is well worth visiting.
                泰山之旅
   I suggest you choose the trip to Mount Tai, 
the first of China's Five Mountains. You will 
be amazed by the scenery especially the 
sunrise. What's more, Mount Tai is heavy 
with beautiful legends, as it has a special 
historic status.  Every year thousands of 
tourists climb the mountain to enjoy the 
beautiful scenery and pray for good luck / 
fortune. From my point of view, it's well worth 
paying a visit to.Not only can you build up/ 
strengthen your body, but also  you can 
broaden your horizons and have a senese of 
achievement. 
                 Para 3

   I firmly believe that the trip is a 
memorable/ unforgettable experience for you. 
Wish you a pleasant trip.

                           Yours,
                            Li Hua
Dear Jim,
  Glad to know _________. Now I’m writing 
to recommend______.
  Personally, I think paying a visit to the 
Yangtze River__________________ . First of 
all, the amazing secenery ______________. 
In addition, Yangtze Riveris _____________.It 
will live up to_______________.
   I firmly believe__________________. 
Wish___________.

                               Yours,
                                Li Hua
Dear Jim,
  Glad to know _________. Now I’m writing 
to recommend______.
  I suggest you______________. You will 
be amazed___________. What's more,
Mount Tai_____________.  Every year 
thousands of tourists__________________. 
From my point of view, it's well ________.
Not only can__________________.
   I firmly believe__________________. 
Wish___________.
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