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                 如何写征求建议的信件


   征求建议的信件,一般分三个部分来写:
   1.首先说明自己的情况,写信的目的;
   2.第二步要讲明自己面临的困难和问题,要简洁明晰;
   3.请求对方给出建议,并且在信的结尾要向对方表示感谢
。
[典型句式]
★自我介绍,征求建议
   My name is...I'm writing to you for some advice on...
   I'm writing a letter to you to get some advice on ...
   Please give me some advice and I will appreciate it very much
   .
★陈述自己面临的困难和问题
   I have a new friend.However, ...
   I can hardly bear/tolerate/put up with it any longer.
   I have great difficulty/trouble in doing...
   I don't know how to learn English.
   I really feel lonely at the new school.
   I find it difficult to...
★请求对方给出建议
   What do you think is the best way for us?
   Do you think it's a good idea to...?
   I don't know what we should do to achieve this goal.
   Could you please tell me...?
   I would appreciate it if...
   I would be grateful if...
   假设你叫李华,欲与本校另外四名同学组建一支乐队,但
缺乏经验,请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯(Cousins)
先生发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助。
   1.成员中有三名男生和两名女生,均喜欢流行音乐与现代
舞蹈。
   2.每周只在周末排练,时间是否够用?初期演唱宜多元化
还是一种风格?
   3.怎样获得较多的表演机会?
   4.希望他能为乐队取个名字。
   注意:词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Cousins,
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
                                     Yours sincerely,
                                             Li Hua
   [写作要点]
   1.首段点明身份及写信目的。
   2.中段介绍所遇问题,即求助内容,可用first,second,
last或to begin with,besides,what's more等依次陈述。
   3.尾段写希望得到别人的帮助,并盼回复,可用Would 
you like to give us some advice?或I/We'd appreciate it if you 
would come up with...for...或We are thankful for you to...
                     范文示例

   Dear Mr.Cousins,
   I'm Li Hua.①Since you are a well­known musician,I'm 
writing this E­mail to②ask you for some advice on how to ②form a 
band.
   I, together with two boys and two girls in our school,want to 
form a band.Not only are we all fond of pop music,but we like 
modern dance as well, both of which make our life colorful.I'd 
like to know①whether we should play one kind of music or 
different styles to start with.And is it enough to practise only at 
weekends?
   ③Besides, how can we get more chances to perform? We'd 
appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.
   Looking forward to your reply.
   Best wishes!
                                    Yours sincerely,
                                            Li Hua
                     亮点点评

   本篇文章表意完整,条理清楚,开篇点明目的,内容叙述
完整,末尾提出美好期盼,句与句之间过渡合理,是一篇不错
的习作。
   ①since,whether引导的从句使表达的内容充实丰富。
   ②ask...for advice,form a band等短语运用恰当。
   ③过渡性词语Besides等的运用使上下文过渡自然。
   假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校上暑期课程,你遇到了
一些困难,希望能够得到学校学习中心(Learning Center)的帮助
。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按照下列要点写一封信
:
   1.本人简介;
   2.求助内容;
   3.约定时间;
   4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@126.com;Tel:
12345678)
   注意:1.词数100左右;
   2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
   3.开头及结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
   Dear Sir/Madam,
   ___________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________           
Looking forward to your immediate reply.
                                           Yours,
                                            Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
           I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking summer courses 
in your university.I'm writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I 
have some difficulties taking notes and I have no idea how to use 
the library.I was told that the Learning Center provides help for 
students, so I'm wondering if I could get some help from you.I 
have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please 
let me know which day is convenient for you.
   You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and 
telephone number: lihua@ 126.com; 12345678.
   Looking forward to your immediate reply.
                                           Yours,
                                            Li Hua
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