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                    真正的英语作文绝杀大招:避免重复!

 Dear David,

     How  are you  doing? Recently, you  said in your last letter that you 

 were learning Chinese. So, I am writing to give you some suggestions.

     In fact, there are a lot of things you can do to realize your dream. To 

 begin with, there is no doubt that you are supposed  to read  some  local 

books and magazines as well as watch some CCTV programs, so that you 

 will know more   about  our culture. Besides, needless to say, it is also 

 beneficial for you  to  listen to some   songs, like Above   the  Moon, 

considering that they can improve your pronunciation and listening skills. 

 What’s more, no one can deny, it is high time that you took part in some 

 language  courses, which can  provide you  with some  useful words   and 

 grammar. Finally, it is clear that, if I were you, I would make some friends 

from China, for practice makes perfect.

     Hopefully, my  suggestions  would  be  beneficial for you.I have the 

 confidence that you will master this beautiful language before long. I am 

 looking forward to your good news.

      Best wishes.

                                                                   Yours,

                                                                    LiHua

                        第六讲:提纲作文写法(上)

    [2014·江西卷] 

    假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What                                to 
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 learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己

的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

    1. 学会学习:方法、习惯等;

    2. 学会做人:真诚、友善等;

    3. 其他方面:考生自拟。

    注意:1.    词数  120 左右;

    2. 发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

    Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you 

my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

    ________________________________________________________________________

    ________________________________________________________________________

    Thank you! 

 注意:但凡需要自拟的地方,要尽可能想得“简单”!
 【“亮点提纲”法】
 方法:脑子里想着要写的内容,提纲中列出能用的“语言亮点”。
 作用:(1)内容能写全(2)结构很清晰(3)语言不重复
 1、It is high time that sb would do sth.【虚拟语气】
 真的到了某人该做某事的时候了
 (1)Mastering effective learning method… 【动名词作主语】
 掌握高效的学习方法…
 (2)It is essential for you to… 【形式主语结构】
 这件事对你是有必要的,什么事儿呢…
 2、You are supposed to do sth. 【高级单词】
 (1)It is honesty that… 【强调句】
 正是诚实…
 (2)Being friendly, you will…【非谓语动词结构】
 保持友善,你将…
 3、If I were you, I would… 【虚拟语气】
 4、【我希望】Hopefully, sb would do sth. 【虚拟语气】
 【我相信】I have the confidence that…【同位语从句】
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    Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you 

my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

    First and foremost, it is high time that you learnt to study. For one 

 thing, mastering some   effective learning method  will be beneficial for 

 you. For example, I have learned to take notes in my  high school, which 

 has helped me save a lot of time. For another, there is no doubt that it is 

 essential for you to cultivate good learning habits, so that you will fall in 

 love with study. 

    Additionally, you are supposed to learn to be a good person. To begin 

 with, it is honesty that plays an important role in your communication 

with  others.  Only  in this way can  you make   more  and  more  friends. 

 What’s   more, being  friendly, you will get more love and support from 

people around you.

    Last but not least, if I were you, I would take part in some after school 

 activities. Hopefully, my suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the 

confidence that you will enjoy yourselves in the coming three years.

 [2014·福建卷] 

    如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语

 (quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。

    “Success  is the ability (to go)  (from   one failure) (to  another) 

(with no loss)  (of enthusiasm).” —Sir Winston Churchill

    内容要求:
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    1.你对该引语的理解;

    2.你的相关经历;

    3.恰当的结尾。

    This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that __________ 

 【亮点提纲】

 1、It is enthusiasm that…【强调句】

 (1) As for the reasons, for one thing, enthusiasm can…

 (2)For another, without enthusiasm, we can’t…

 2、Take  my   own  experience  for example.  Three years  ago, …  Then,… 

After that,… Now,…

 3、Hopefully, I would always remember …. I have the confidence that…


    This quotation  from  Winston  Churchill tells us that it is enthusiasm 

that  helps us achieve every success. As for the  reasons, for one thing, 

 there is no doubt that enthusiasm can give us a lot of energy in whatever 

 we do. For another,  needless to say, without enthusiasm,  we  teenagers 

can’t overcome so many difficulties.

    Take my own experience for example. Three years ago, I made up my 

 mind to master spoken English. Then, I started to find foreigners (to talk 

 with), for I believe practice makes perfect. However, my English was  so 

 poor then that they couldn’t understand me, which made me very upset. 

 But, my enthusiasm made me work on. Now, I can speak English fluently. 

    Hopefully, I would always keep in mind the importance of enthusiasm. 
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I have the confidence that I will achieve greater success in the future.

注意:记叙性段落一般不能用黄金圣衣来升级,但是可以用白银裤衩升级。


[2014·广东卷] 

你接受了一项写作任务,要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。

[写作内容]

请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道,内容包括:

人物:英国人理查德·阿维斯(Richard Avis)

出生日期:1974     年  12 月 1 日

事件:2011   年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日出生的人

目的:理解不同文化中成功人生的含义

相关信息:

•借助当地媒体寻找

•迄今找到    32 名,其中男性      17 名,女性    15 名,来自    13 个国家

•职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等

•计划  40 岁生日前找到      40 位同年同月同日出生的人

•打算根据此经历写一本书

* 同年同月同日出生的人:time twin

[写作要求]只能用      5 个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

【解题关键】

在一个句子里面写入尽可能多的信息
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 【操作方法】

 灵活使用介短、从句、非谓语三大造句工具进行扯蛋!

   (Born on December 1st, 1974), an Englishman Richard Avis started to look 

 (for people) (born) (on the same day) (with him) (from all over the world) 

 (with the help) (of local media). His aim is (to understand the meaning) (of a 

 successful life) (in different cultures). Up to now, he has found 32 people 

 (from 13 countries), (in which) there are 17 male and 15 female. Their jobs 

 include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers and artists. His plan is 

(to find 40 people) (born) (on the same  day) (with him) and write a book 

(based on this experience).


 作业:列出亮点提纲+写出完整作文

 [2014·湖南卷] 

   Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions 

 given below.

   学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋

 子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My                magic________”为题写一篇英语短文,介

 绍你的创意。

    内容:

    1.说明设计理由;

    2.介绍新功能。

    注意:

    1. 词数不少于     120;
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   2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ] 

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完

成短文。

1. 家庭;

2. 工作;

3. 业余生活。

注意:

1. 词数 100 左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

___________________________________________


                        第七讲   提纲作文特训(下)
【高分作文的三个特征】
1、内容要简单;

2、结构要清晰;

3、语言要精彩。
【“亮点提纲”法】
方法:脑子里想着要写的内容,提纲中列出能用的“语言亮点”。
作用:(1)内容能写全(2)结构很清晰(3)语言不重复

[2014·湖南卷] 
                     中国现代教育网   www.30edu.com  全国最大教师交流平台
  Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions 

given below.

  学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋

子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My                magic________”为题写一篇英语短文,介

绍你的创意。

   内容:

   1.说明设计理由;

   2.介绍新功能。

   注意:1.    词数不少于     120;2.  不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

【亮点提纲】

                            My magic desk

1、Today, I would like to…, which will be…

2、From my perspective, there are two main reasons why…

(1)For one thing, so common is a desk that… 

(2)For another, its functions…

3、To make the desk better, a screen will be added to the desk. As for its 

functions, first and foremost,… Additionally,.. Last but not least,…

4、Hopefully,… I have the confidence that…

【范文】

   Today, I would like to design a new kind of desk for our everyday use, 

which will be not only useful but also entertaining. 

   From   my  perspective, there are two  main  reasons  why  I want  to 

design a new desk. For one thing, so common is a desk that we must use 
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 it every day. For another, no one can deny its functions are too simple; as 

 a result, I want to add some new functions to it, so that we can use it (as a 

better tool) (for our life and study).

    To make a desk more convenient, a screen will be added to it. As for 

 its functions, firstly, it can show the teachers’ PPT, in order that we can 

 see it more clearly. Besides, we can  directly do our homework   on  the 

 screen and send it to the teacher so as to save paper. 

    Hopefully, my  design  would  be realized soon. I have the confidence 

 that it will make our life better.


 万能利

 (1)既有意义又有趣         It is not only meaningful but also entertaining.

 (2)培养兴趣开阔视野丰富课余生活               It can  cultivate our interests, broaden 

our horizons and enrich our after school life.

 (3)有助于身心健康/健康快乐的成长

 It can contribute to our physical and mental health.

 It can contribute to our happy and healthy growth.

 万能弊

 (1)浪费时间,浪费金钱,浪费精力

 It is a great waste of time, money and energy.

 (2)影响身心健康        It may have bad/negative influence on our health.

 (3)影响学习      It may have negative effect on our study.
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英语段落的基本结构:主题句+解释句+总结句

                  (每个解释句前面要加过渡词)

                            T+E1+E2+E3+C

各种常用过渡词:

主题句. For one thing, E1. For another, E2.

主题句.On the one hand, E1. On the other hand, E2.

主题句. First and foremost, E1. Additionally,E2. Last but not least, E3.

主题句. To begin with, E1. Besides,E2. What’s more,E3.Finally,E4.


[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ] 

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完

成短文。

1. 家庭;

2. 工作;

3. 业余生活。

注意:1.   词数  100 左右;2.    可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好。

【提纲】

1、As for my family, I will … , which…. 

2、When it comes to my job, I will be a famous singer.

3、In my spare time, I will


   I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. As for my family, I 
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 will live with my family in a big house facing the sea. Every morning, we will 

 do morning exercise on the beach together, breathing the clean air, feeling 

 the warm sunlight, watching sea birds dancing above us. After lunch, we will 

go swimming or go boating in the sea, in order to catch some fish for dinner. 

 Every evening, a BBQ party will always be held on the beach, when we will 

laugh and sing, enjoying ourselves. How happy my life will be!

    When   it comes to my job, I will be a famous writer. So popular are my 

 books that I can make a lot of money to support my family. I prefer to write at 

night, accompanied  by the light of the twinkling stars and the sound of the 

 naughty wave, when everything else goes dark and silent.

    In my  spare  time, I will play computer games  with  my  high school 

 classmates, who are all successful and wealthy. Hopefully, my dreams would 

come true!


    I want (to go) (to school).

    这里的    to go 是个动词不定式,to       叫做“小品词”;

    to school 是个介词短语,这里的         to 是“介词”


 天下所有的谓语动词=助动词部分+实意动词部分

 其中,助动词表示该谓语动词的“时态”、“被动”、“虚拟”、“情态”等含义;

 实意动词表示该谓语动词的核心“动作”。

 I will not go to Beijing.

 I am happily teaching English.
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I was unfortunately beaten by my father.

I do love you. 

I have already been teaching English for 9 years.

助动词部分中的第一个助动词,称为“活跃助动词”,当我们需要加副词、加否定、

变疑问、变倒装时,折腾的,都是这个活跃助动词!

副词的位置:be      后,实前,助实间

                        第八讲   书信作文特训(上)

[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]

   假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你

的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。


注意:

1.词数 100 左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:住宿       accommodation

Dear Sir or Madam,

    How   are you doing?  I am  LiHua, a 17-year-old  teenager currently 
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 studying in China, who is crazy about travelling. Recently, I learnt in your 

advertisement  that a relaxing study break will be held in England, which 

 attracts me a lot. So, I am writing to ask you some relevant questions.

     To  begin with, I plan to enjoy  a 6-week  trip, so I am  wondering 

 (when the trip will start). Besides, I would be grateful if you tell me (how 

 many students would study in one class) and (how many hours we would 

 study per week).  What’s   more, since you  said (that the fee would  be 

 reasonable), would you be so kind as to tell me the exact cost of the trip? 

 Finally, will we live on campus or live off campus? 

     Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me. I have 

 the confidence that I will enjoy myself this summer. I am looking forward 

 to your earliest reply.

     Best wishes!

                                                                   Yours,

                                                                    LiHua

 [2014·四川卷] 

 假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友            Sam  来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以下要点回

 信告知:

 1. 考试日期与科目;         2. 考试准备情况;

 3. 考试时的状态;          4. 对试题的感受; 

 5. 可能的考试结果。

 注意:1.   词数  120 左右;    2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好; 

 3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 
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4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 

参考词汇:高考       college entrance examination

Dear Sam, 

    How are you doing? Recently, I received your last letter asking me 

about my college entrance examination. So, I am writing to tell you some 

relevant details about it.

    To begin with, the exams were held on June 7th and 8th including 

Chinese, Math, Science and English. Fortunately, I had done a lot of 

preparation for them; as a result, I was very excited and relaxed during 

these exams. From my perspective, the questions were rather simple. We 

could do a good job if we were careful enough. As for the result, I have 

the confidence that I can get as many as 700 points as a whole.

    Hopefully, I would be admitted to Tsinghua University in the near 

future, which has always been my dream. 

    Best wishes!

                                                                  Yours,

                                                                   LiXia 

Recently, I received your last letter (asking about my exams).

中文:图方便

英语:求精确(反思你写出来的这句话有没有“表达清楚”你的意思)英语靠“语

法的变形”来表达精确含义!

By now, Dad is 65. And mom would have been 63.
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 Handsome Chou is a 18-year-old man (currently teaching math in 

 Koolearn), who, (born in 1997), (having graduating) (from Peking 

 University), is crazy about cartoons.  


 I was born in 1987.


                        第九讲    书信作文特训(下)

 开头段:问候+自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的

 中间段:具体问题+具体分析(自己造句表达,用圣衣、裤衩升级)

 结尾段:我希望+我相信+感谢你+请回信

 最容易考的书信类型:告知信、邀请信、询问信

 [2014·天津卷] 

 假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,                得知美国学生       Chris 作为交换生,下学期

将到你班学习。        请你根据以下提示,          给他写封邮件:

    1. 表示欢迎;

    2. 介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、                饮食等);

    3. 介绍本班情况;

    4. 希望  Chris 做哪些事情,       以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。

    注意:

    1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;
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    2. 可适当加入细节,        使内容充实、行文连贯;

    3. 词数不少于     100; 开头已给出,       不计入总词数。

    参考词汇:交换生          exchange student

 Dear Chris, 

    I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.___________ 

_____________________

                                                                  Yours,

                                                                     Li Jin

 【亮点提纲】

 一、Now, I am writing to express my heartfelt welcome to you.

 二、

 (1)mild, in that…sea

 (2) special food, such as… Mahua and Baozi.

 三、

 (1) friendly

 (2)hardworking

 四、Hopefully, you would…

 【范文】

 Dear Chris, 

    I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I am informed (that 

 you are coming) (to our class) (to study) (as an exchange student). How 

 glad I am! So, I am writing to express my heartfelt welcome to you and 

 tell you some details about your life and study here.
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    To begin with, I would like to talk about the local climate. To tell you 

 the truth, it is very mild here, in that Tianjin is close to the sea. Besides, 

 you might be interested in the local food. Fortunately, we have a lot of 

traditional food such as Mahua and Baozi, which are very famous in China. 

 Accordingly, I am sure you will enjoy your life here.

    By the way, our classmates are all kind, hardworking and friendly. We 

 are looking forward to your joining us. Hopefully, you would learn a lot of 

 Chinese culture and share with us your own experience in order to 

 improve the understanding and friendship between Chinese and 

 American students. 

    Best wishes!

                                                                  Yours,

                                                                    Li Jin

 【方法】

 动词        动名词

 love          loving

 run           running

 you love me      your loving me

 you help me      your helping

 you come         your coming

 I close       my closing

 【例句】

 Would you mind my closing the windows?
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Thank you for your helping me.

I am looking forward to your coming soon.

I apologize for my coming late.


【感叹句】关键在于看懂所强调的是名词还是形容词副词!

感叹一个牛逼的名词结构:What+名词结构+主语+谓语!

What a clever boy he is!

What a lot of food you have eaten!

What a beautiful park it is! = How beautiful the park is!

It is a beautiful park. ------ The park is beautiful.

感叹一个牛逼的形容词或副词:How +               形容词或副词       +主语+谓语!

How fast he runs!

How glad I am.

How beautiful this park is!

【例题】

1、How fine the weather is!

2、What fine weather it is!

【补充】“What +       名词!”表达强烈的赞美或抱怨之情。

What a day!

What a boy!


[2014·浙江卷] 

   学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校
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 图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular               science   books)和文学类图书(literary 

 books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封                100~120  个词的信,推荐这两类书,

 并分别说明推荐理由。

    注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。

    Dear Mr Wang,

    ________________________________________________________________________

                                                           Yours sincerely,

                                                                    Li Yue

 Dear Mr Wang,

     How are you doing? I am Li Yue, a 16-year-old teenager currently 

studying in our school. Recently, I learnt that the school library is going 

to purchase some new books. So, I am writing to give you some 

suggestions.

     On the one hand, no one can deny you may purchase some popular 

 science books, which are not only meaningful but also entertaining. On 

 the other hand, you can buy some literary books, in that they can 

 cultivate our taste and broaden our horizons. 

     Hopefully, my suggestions would be taken by you. I am confidence 

that our library will become more and more interesting as well as helpful 

 for us. Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. I am looking 

 forward to your new books.

     Best wishes.

                                                                  Yours, 
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                                                                  LiYue


名词单复数、时态、标点、大小写


学语法,就是搞清楚“什么形”表达“什么意”。

祈使句:动词原形开头,表示“祈求”、“使唤”

(If you want to look further), stand on an upper floor.


非谓语动词

(To look further), you should stand on an upper floor.
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